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Aquantis
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A fan comic created by Laura - Zavraan named: Aquantis.
This story takes place in the universe of Ecco the dolphin, defender of the future. 200 years after his death, the dolphins of the future have created a paradise city around the island called: Aquantis. But a dolphin named Tydea will discover more about his seemingly 'perfect' city.
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Description
Page One of my new comic series Rings of Time.
Previous Page - [link]
Next Page - [link]
First Page - N/A
Since this is the first page I REALLY BADLY want some crit on what's good, what needs work and such with this comic. Please tell me what you like, what you don't, how to improve it and such please.
This comic will be black and white, in pencil, with some shading to the pictures. I'm no expert, so it won't be perfect, but I will do my best.
Edit: 01/10/07 - *Kameira has made a coloured version of this page. Scrap of the original page can be found here: [link]
Rings of Time story © *Okura
Okura, Tiare, Dionus and related characters © *Okura
Coloured page made by *Kameira
Previous Page - [link]
Next Page - [link]
First Page - N/A
Since this is the first page I REALLY BADLY want some crit on what's good, what needs work and such with this comic. Please tell me what you like, what you don't, how to improve it and such please.
This comic will be black and white, in pencil, with some shading to the pictures. I'm no expert, so it won't be perfect, but I will do my best.
Edit: 01/10/07 - *Kameira has made a coloured version of this page. Scrap of the original page can be found here: [link]
Rings of Time story © *Okura
Okura, Tiare, Dionus and related characters © *Okura
Coloured page made by *Kameira
Image size
929x1573px 1.76 MB
© 2007 - 2024 Okura
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Looks interesting!