Page One of my new comic series Rings of Time
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Since this is the first page I REALLY BADLY
want some crit on what's good, what needs work and such with this comic. Please tell me what you like, what you don't, how to improve it and such please.
This comic will be black and white, in pencil, with some shading to the pictures. I'm no expert, so it won't be perfect, but I will do my best.
Edit: 01/10/07 - *Kameira
has made a coloured version of this page. Scrap of the original page can be found here: [link]
Rings of Time story © *Okura
Okura, Tiare, Dionus and related characters © *Okura
Coloured page made by *Kameira